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[runedog83 uzi tut]

Way better

Much better with the sound gliches fixed. Good tut, Keep up the good work!

runedog83 responds:

thanks man that means a lot to me

[runedog38's gun tut]

For a first tutorial...

,,,its not necessarily the worst I've seen. However the issue with the audio is pretty bad. Skipping a step results in overlapping audio playing that just gets annoying. For future reference try to make a tutorial that is either a flash video, that can have audio playing with time restrictions on advancing, or simply text based if its going to be interactive and user paced. There is a bit of a glitch that occurs before the preview (22 steps in). It requires you to right click and press play in order to advance to the last slide and see the preview animation of the gun firing. Like I said the tutorial is not horrible but it needs quite a bit of work. Keep it up.

[Mastermind 5]

Awesomeness

"My life in your service is a series of unforeseen adventure sir."
Great stuff! Awesome use of a simple color palette makes it fun to look at!
Instead of a t-rex or alligators/crocs maybe a gigantic panda that shoots lasers?